You wouldn't believe the work every single student did this week!
On Monday we wrapped up our rainy day pieces and in light of the upcoming festivities, I wanted to have a fun activity for all!
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Connor's illustration of each step in the pumpkin carving process |
In order to keep with the season, I brought in a pumpkin of our own in order to help in our planning process. We also had two great mentors: Jacqueline Farmer's
Pumpkins (a narrative) and Dana Meachen Rau's
How to Library: Carving Pumpkins. Each student got a chance to reach into the pumpkin in order to really feel what they would be writing about. After they washed their hands, they brainstormed descriptive words. We did a quick turn and talk to share words!
On Wednesday we wrapped up our planning process and our first draft! Some students sketched each step of the process of carving a pumpkin. I love how Connor even showed the candle he uses in his own pumpkin!
Today the students paired off and spent 15 minutes helping each other edit their pieces. Student's were grabbing dictionaries, fixing high frequency words and adding words that our fast moving brains skip over sometimes! I was so impressed with the buzzing around the room!! After our pair work, we transitioned quickly into our final drafting phase.
Ben D. did a great job!
Now these are just tidbit's of Oceanna and Ari's work. However both are wonderful examples of the products that we can create when we slow down and really take our time!
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| By Oceanna T. |
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By Ari M. One of my favorite parts of this piece is the story behind the illustration! |